Im Not Okay

by ŘÅÇĦ♥   Dec 18, 2005


There are so many questions
In my mind that remain unanswered.
Would you miss me if Im gone?
Would you notice if I wasn't at school?
How long would it take?
Do you know I am dying inside,
And you helped kill me?
Your words are as sharp as a razor blade.
It cut my heart up
and still I dont think you notice.
I go around saying I am fine;
School was great.
When I want to say NO,
Im not okay
And if you dont realize that
I am sorry!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    From reading your other poems then comparing to this piece I have to say that you have really improved so much. On this I found it to be simple. I liked it none the less. I don't get the comment you have gotten though saying have you heard of chemical romance. Strange. None the less a good effort

  • 18 years ago

    by ãêx

    Rach!
    I'm drawn to this poem
    I love it
    Keep on doing your writing
    Your are so good
    You could be a writer
    Love ya-Alex

  • 18 years ago

    by SingleWing

    Have u heard of my chemical romance by any chance?

  • 18 years ago

    by LettersFromEnnis

    I like this! Its very emtional and you show it quite well in your words. Great job! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alicia

    Thats really good...