Great poem!

5/5!!

If you have a chance check out mine sometime.. If you do please comment!!

Thanks, C-ya

-Usher Stiegler

Thats really good...

I like this! Its very emtional and you show it quite well in your words. Great job! 5/5!

Have u heard of my chemical romance by any chance?

Rach!
I'm drawn to this poem
I love it
Keep on doing your writing
Your are so good
You could be a writer
Love ya-Alex

From reading your other poems then comparing to this piece I have to say that you have really improved so much. On this I found it to be simple. I liked it none the less. I don't get the comment you have gotten though saying have you heard of chemical romance. Strange. None the less a good effort