Hi
i liked it. somewhere v both seems to hav same chemistry. very true feelings. keep writing!!!!!!!

I think this ios a very well written poem filled with feeling and thou it is short and simple i can feel your pain. i no wt your going throu as i am at the mo aswell and i no it can tear your heart apart espcialy as you put your trust in osmeone only to have it thrown back in your face. 5/5 btw.