Great poem and so true.

maybe belongs in the "poems about life" section? i'm not sure i am not very good at knowing where to put them

"Dress a all the same"
There's something wrong with this line. Take out that a I guess. But loved the idea because it's true about how some people are. Nice write for the topic.
~DFTI

This is soo true.. great poem.. I liked it..

Hey, great poem ...very true... i really liked it and want to read more or yous and thnks for reading mine...keep up the good poems...:)

Amazing & so true... i do this all the time !!
5/5

Oh so true. this is the story of high school girls. i can see some girls deteriorating in front of me. well the poem is good. esp
So they take all those pills
And slowly massacre themsleves
Slowly fading away to nothing

True. But in the end not many people listen. I guess that these little models need a stronger wake-up call. We all do. It is a pity that so many people who look great can't stop there...they take diet to the extreme.

I liked the poem because it was done in your usual style, without dramatics..just as it is.

//T.L.//