by hannah Dec 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Kissing me softly was only a lie |
Very clever... i like it... this poem didnt need to rhyme because it has a cold hard truthful message and i think if it did rhyme it would seem too fake.. Hope you get what i mean sorry if you dont lol |
You told it like it is, i didnt rythm and thats why i liked it, good job |