You told it like it is, i didnt rythm and thats why i liked it, good job

Very clever... i like it... this poem didnt need to rhyme because it has a cold hard truthful message and i think if it did rhyme it would seem too fake.. Hope you get what i mean sorry if you dont lol
well done you rock...
if you get a chance maybe check out some of my poems
well thanks for the good read
keep smiling
and safe
Erin