This poem really tells alot. its not about something made up its real. I love it!!! it about reality and life. you should try to write songs i believe that you could really go somewhere with this stuff.

I think that was a great poem with an even more important message.

That is awesome, you have alot of talent, the message in this is really good and its nice to see peole who actually care about others. Keep it up!

This is really awesome. You're so talented and you're only 12!! Take a look at my stuff if u want