by Sirkka / Selene Dec 18, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
You can't avoid it, |
Hey another good poem, the rhyming is once again good, as is the rythmn. lol once again a spelling mistake on through, and i think u meant to use "too" instead of "to" in a couple of places, but really really good, keep writing!!! |
by Tine
That's waaauw, once again!! :D I guess u r making a style out of it, these fantastic poems!! |
by .+*Jess*+.
Great poem i like the line about the razor sharp wings it gives a good image |