Great poem i like the line about the razor sharp wings it gives a good image

That's waaauw, once again!! :D I guess u r making a style out of it, these fantastic poems!!
k, ff int ned e :) euhm, kvind da u gedichten dus echt wel keigoed zijn, ze rijmen altijd mooi, het onderwerp is goed gekoze; elke keer, kortom; perfect!!
I just can't wait to read more!!

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Hey another good poem, the rhyming is once again good, as is the rythmn. lol once again a spelling mistake on through, and i think u meant to use "too" instead of "to" in a couple of places, but really really good, keep writing!!!