I have to admit that it is boring, but you get your point across. If you really think about it, shouldn't it be boring? You feel empty inside. No emotion. Thats what people feel when they read the poem. Well, I did anyway. Good job. 5/5

Good poem. i feel like i died some time ago but my soul forgot its body. im going thru the worst tiimes. lean on frends tho. they can help u find urself.