Good Job! 5/5 And I hope things get better..But you cant always believe other people when they say he cuts and stuff *unless u know him in real life..* because they MAY just be trying to make you feel worse about what has happened..But anyways! I hope things get better for you..

Aww hun i feel sp bad for you but do go killing your self plz dont i am sure you be dearly missed try making him listen too u. i hope and pray that everything works out right

I can relate to this. my ex is suicidal too, and it was a long distance relationship (hes around 300miles away) so i could never do anything to help when he felt really low. your poem is really good. talk to him, also if he has some close friends who you know ask them to keep an eye on him.

hope everything turns out alright.

Hey! Aww all the best to you, I hope everything gets better. 5/5! This poem is so sad,but nicely writen. I loved ->tonight they weep,
silence is their song,
while other people try to sleep,
she wonders what went wrong.

I loved that!

No... he conntinues to push me away, he broke up with me, his friends won't lie to me, they know what lying would do...
they won't lie to me after he was lying in the hospital hanging on for his life for 2 weeks... he's thought about suicide before, they found it in his diary... just... he actuallie done it... he has to go to oxford, he doesn't want to, we live pretty close, (30 min drive?), even though he can drive we still cant be together for other reasons... parents... work, etc... i always thought hanging on would help... but i just pused him to the edge of suicide instead...

:( i can relate good write im gonna go read more

Great but very sad and depressing no-one should ever feel that wat!

Tht waz really go0d!! but i hope tht u wudnt try n do tht...every moment n every day iz wroth living 4....no matter wat!!! keep ya head up!!