WoW. i'm not condoning wot ur dad did, but it has certinally given you enough passion to write and portray your passion into your writing! all the poems i've read of yours have had something unique and extremely special to them. Do you ever think you can fully forgive him for what he's done to you?

I dont think I ever will forgive,

All the times he left me in pain, Almost 3 nights a week I was left on the floor bleeding from being hit from him and his friends, But I didnt take it that bad, Because every step of the way my brother was there, Id wake up from being knocked out and hed be beside me knocked out too. I have 9 brothers and 5 sisters, yet he only bashed me and my brother thomas. I will never be able to forgive him..

Thank-you for the comments and reading my poems!!

5/5 from me again. Wow. That bites. Don't know any words to say how that poem made me feel. I try to write about events like that in my life, but it is hard. You got to have a strong soul to still be going on. Good luck with your future. Hopefully, you'll never have to use the knief.

Hey I know how it feels to be hit with a baseball bat I got gang bashed like 3 years ago and now everytime I go somewhere I am very cautious and If I don't feel safe I whip out my pocket knife and keep it where people can see it.

anywase hit me up on msn

sincerely

MariA

p.s.Suicidal_Goth@msn.com