Ok...let me explain this one. Have you ever like one of your teachers from school? or think that they're really cute? Well...this one's about someone like that...just a little more special. Someone that became part of my life and now's like my heart. Without that person...I can't go on...^_^

I liked your poem it actually made me cry, i haven't ever liked an older teacher but if that person is whom you belong to then i wish you and him the best of luck and be happy that is what helps us go on! I loved your poem keep writing

Beautifully written. The person for which this is written must be truly honored to have someone such as yourself feel so strongly about them. I am sure that he is smiling widely.

Gesselle ,
Such an open poem of honesty from the heart .
Your feelings speak loud and clear from beginning to end ...
Beautifully written .....

WOW Gesselle u bet me 2 it. I LUV ur poem! Nicely done. I've been writting something about my secreat love for an older man who has changed my life.

Gesselle,

This is such a lovely touching write. You know, it may be wise to open up your feelings to this person. Age they say is never a problem and I think it is true, there was a 39 year age difference between my Father and Mother and they loved each other dearly. Wish you all the best.

Warmest regards,

Steve

What to say? a very special poem. To be honest, it was a little hard to read with your style of capitalization of your letters, but well worth it. Makes me feel not so bad about ageing, you know? thanks for sharing it.

Beautiful!!! Love is such a powerful thing, and it can overcome must problems and issues. This poem you've put your heart into, and made very special. You obviously found something true, and special. Well written :)

Omg really good poem andd very toughing u really have telent keep it up! shy comments JoSiE

Some people just do that to us.... age is only a number... A beautiful and touching write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

0h that was really g0od. beutiful and heartfelt keep it up

I'venever likied a teacher before but if this is wt this poem is about i dont no where u live but in england its kind of impossible so try to firget or else your gonna get hurt a lot. well good luck and take no notice of me if its gonna oupset u too much.

love elnaz

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!! it was the best it deserves higher than a 5 wow im relle ready to cry! -later!

Sweet

Beautiful phrases! good enough to eat! ;D 5/5