I Write This From My Grave

by lonelynow   Dec 18, 2005


*please read it all*

i have no feelings
life is all pretend
I'm stuck behind this mask
that no one can comprehend

i sit here all alone
acting that i care
going through the motions
being only too aware

I'm all but dead inside
but my body carries on
I'm just an empty shell
I'm just a person withdrawn

acting out all the emotions
that i knew so well
practicing for when i get better
for when i am released from my hell

i write this from my grave
my eternal and final jail
I'm buried inside my own body
i tried so hard to prevail

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So now I sit around
Pretending to be me
I’m dead inside and what really hurts
Is that no one seems to see

* please please comment..if i have ever needed your comments..it is now..please*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem...u tell it well. u blow me away by ur gr8 poetry. my favorit part is:
    i sit here all alone
    acting that i care
    going through the motions
    being only too aware

  • 18 years ago

    by Angelchaser

    Hey i promised you i'd comment your poems on here someday. tada heres my first. i think this is really great tho chilling. your so talented. make sure you keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    WOW girl you can really write..i loved this poem..i can relate to it...keep it up girl...Joc

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Thats an ... unfortunately. well i hope things get better for u. thx for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Purple

    I love this poem... Simple but with deph, and a 'flow' that fits the mood. Keep up the good work.

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