Really good I liked it alot

Wow.......by far the best one ive seen, that was really great, perfect rhythm, nice rhymes, u can tell u put deep emotion in this poem, excellent job i would give it a 10 if i could 5/5

ttyl sometime PeAcE

I love this poem... Simple but with deph, and a 'flow' that fits the mood. Keep up the good work.

Thats an ... unfortunately. well i hope things get better for u. thx for the comment

WOW girl you can really write..i loved this poem..i can relate to it...keep it up girl...Joc

Hey i promised you i'd comment your poems on here someday. tada heres my first. i think this is really great tho chilling. your so talented. make sure you keep writing.

Gr8 poem...u tell it well. u blow me away by ur gr8 poetry. my favorit part is:
i sit here all alone
acting that i care
going through the motions
being only too aware