Issuinoyume (An Empty Dream)

by Anthony   Dec 18, 2005


**Parts of this poem is in Japanese, but the meanings of the words are explained ^_^**

wazurawashii renbo,
Complicated emotions,
Flooding my heart like I'm drowning.
issuinoyume of this musouka,
An Empty dream for this dreamer,
A dream of nothing but space.
Nothing there, just time.
genmetsu of a miraikanryou
Disillusionment of a perfect future.
The pure ten'imuhou, perfect beauty,
Of our lives are insignificant.
Can the world heal us?
Gomennasai, I'm sorry,
It can't.
And when I started to call you for help,
I stopped myself,
And fell into issuinoyume,
An Empty Dream...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    The Japanese words kinda made it hard to read, however I like the fact that you tried something new.

    You don't see many of us doing just that.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    Great poem nice job. 5/5 fropm me. keep up the good wrk

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    AJ I loved it!! Its so different. No one else would think to do something like this. You're setting a new trend baby brother!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Brilliant! A touch of genius added to the poem. A good poem with a twist of something new. I liked it a lot, well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    The Japanese effect is very creative. The poem is really good, but I really like the japanese language :)

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