AMAZING!

I have a problem and i think that maybe you could help me out...I like this guy and i have since i started 6th grade and Im in 10th now...he flirts with me and stuff and i dont think he knows that i like him as much as i do... do you think that i should tell him??? if you could help me it would really mean alot.... Heather oh by the way great poem

Wow i loved it so much it relates to me alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!great

And she goes on watching them as they hold
Hands and how this girl has everything she wants in
The palm of her hands, she wish so hard and cries
So much only for her one dream to become her
Reality

Oh my gosh... that part is so sad. This whole poem's amazing, and you've definitely got alot of talent. Keep up the great writing hun!

I loved it and it relyl spoke to me and dont worry i have goten ideas from other poems so its cool and thanky ou for the comment on my " crap "

Well thank you for the comment on my work again and i love all of your work

That was very sad but yet Beautiful you have an awesome way with words keep up the excellent write 5/5 :)

"Of what he might say afraid that he break her heart "

I dunno why but this line didn't seem to fit to me... maybe try sumthin like

Of what he might say, afraid that he'd break her heart....

I dunno just a thought other than that is is a very good poem! Keep up the good work!!!

Marie

Wow

This reminds me of my friend...
who is dabbling in drugs to get this guy she wants. Depressing.
But it was amazing.
Snaps to you.

Great poem Ash...Thumbs up...5/5

This is really good,
slightly sad, yet well written and i can relate to it well!

XxXxsmilexXxX

Aww.. Really good. I enjoyed reading it. Well done. xx