He doesnt deserve anything, I hope he had remorse
I liked the way everythin rhymed
keep it up

Wow... such strong emotion, the anger raged from each lines. great poem! im glad you made it through. stay stong and take care.
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Hey darl a p0werful piece with al0t 0f em0ti0n. an0ther t0uching piece.

I know how you feel... the way you write your poem tells a story of your tragedy and that's what i really like about your poem.... 5/5 :)

Thats sad!!
i lvoe that
its great
i can kinda realte
great job
5/5