Comments : Snow

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem it's very cute. keep upt eh good work 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Spinning,
    swirling,
    falling down,
    dancing in the breeze,

    I love this part. It takes me back to fond memories of when I was a child and so loved the snowfall.

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    A stunning visualisation I had from your words. Very beautiful descriptives you had there. The sight of snow brings upon great pleasure, thanks for sharing this wonderful piece. =)