Why?
by Jackie Marie Dec 18, 2005
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*You guys.This poem may sound messed up. But it is about my life. And my life IS messed up. The style may be bad and everything else may be bad but at least it is as true as can be..* |
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18 years ago
A lot of emotion questions and turmoil crammed in to this piece. It flows well.
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18 years ago
Fantastic peice, full of feeling anf very powerful expression. the content is well composed and written, with a good flow thoughout.
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18 years ago
Oh my god this is an amazing poem...and i understand how u feel...ok no i dont...even thoe i may have never been in ur shoes before i feel ur pain one way or another...and it really hurts and i understand that its very hard to stay strong...but u have to try...5/5 on this beautiful poem
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18 years ago
by Darien
It's not messed up. If you want to hear of messed up lives, just talk to someone who lives in a war torn country. This is mild, or even average in a teenage life.
This poem is really sad, and it's terrible that this has happened to you. Don't worry, cheer up. Things turn out better with time. -
18 years ago
by Little Dot
Great emotion. This poem is very sad and moving.
