Paradise

by Sorefromreality   Dec 18, 2005


Sand crumbles between my toes
wind whipping through my hair
fresh scents of palm trees
waves crashing at my feet
sweet lullabies of the ocean breeze
i breathe in the foggy mist
warm sun beating down
silent whispers of seagulls
seashells scattered in the dotted sand
my peaceful feeling of paradise

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aimee Dawn

    I can imagen myself there, but it just didn't catch my attention. It was good, yet bland. I'd try maybe trying to make it flow better.

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