Hell0 that was really g0od. a t0uching write. well d0ne! keep it up!!

Dont listen to what my mouth has to say
Listen to my heart, pounding
When you look my way
Then you'll know
That even though
Your far away from me
Our love is real
It makes me feel
Your all I want and need

I LOVED this part soooo much. This is a beautiful poem! One of the reasons I like it so much is cuz even though I can't really relate to it, it was still good and I still knew what you were talking about. You're such a wonderful poet! Keep it up!

This is sooooo true...i feel the same way...i love the words in this poem...sooo touchin 5/5