Wow... this was beautiful... you did an extremly nice job... the only thing you might want to do is check your spelling on a few words... but other than that you did perfect! congrads on a great write! keep it up!

sammie

I like this poem...good job so keep it up girl....see ya....peace

Fantastic poem.......very well written

I agree with Sammie, and this was a great poem. It makes sense, and it was sort of moving, in its own way. But it reminded me of reality, and it's very well written.

That was very well written... I can some what relate to that. I had a friend die in my hands when I was 8 years old... anyways I loved it very well penned.

That was very well written... I can some what relate to that. I had a friend die in my hands when I was 8 years old... anyways I loved it very well penned.

That was very well written... I can some what relate to that. I had a friend die in my hands when I was 8 years old... anyways I loved it very well penned. Great job!!