Great poem. i can relate. thanks for your comment! take care, |
Great poem. It shows a great deal of feeling and it plainly states it. FLows nicely. Sounds like you would make someone a good friend. Keep up the good work. And yes my poem is about a guy. I know it doesnt flow well but it was a quick ruff draft. Thanks for the comment. |
*speechless....* |
Wow, very nice poem. |
Thanks :) sorry i didn't email you, i thought you didnt email me lol .... im sooo sorry u forgive me rite? i'll email you write now.... |
by Laura Ash
Great poem! definetly a 5! thanks for commenting my poem! |
Gr8 work....the choice of wording was gr8...and it was just gr8...5/5! |
by Symone
You are a very talented poet. |
by Dolores DLF
Thank you for your comment on my poem. I have been away from the site awhile. I have been angry because I lost my best friend because he fell in love with me. I loved him too but I never told him...it's complicated. if only you would read my other poems they are all mostly about him. I guess I stopped writting poems for acouple of months because I was angry at life. I am back now! I wish I had a true friend like you because eventhough I am not young I feel like I am. My niece that is 16 thinks that I am her best friend. We talk for hours ...me making her laugh and listening to her problems. I don't think about how old I am...I just believe that people should be nice to eachother. I think that it doesn't matter how old a person is as long as they care about other people and I hope that you find a true friend that will treat you the way you should be treated. I loved your poem. I am going to add you to my favorites but know that if you just want to talk. Just let me know...I am a good listener. Excellent...5/5!!! |
by Amadeous
Wow, very nice poem.You are a very talented poet. And i like your style of writing. 5/5! i loved it |
by me
Well not to b mean and all but i giv it a 4/5 cuz it was good but not dat great but u still did a great job in it and have ur own style of writing ^.^ |