Super work. This poem is full of a lot of emotion. Well done.

Great poem hun.. 5/5

Good work. I have read several of your poems, and you have some great ideas behind the writing and you have a strongly developed style and common theme. Try to experiment with what you're saying. Try to take one of your poems and the meaning behind it and just re-write it. Its good exercise. Experiment with your words as you've done some-what in here. Continue to develop your vocabulary and continue to experiment and write these great pieces!
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I really liked this one
the flow was great and i dunno i just really liked it.
-DryTears