Awsome write, I can relate, keep it up 5/5

Wow very good rhythem i loved it and you ahve so much talent and such a moving writing style!!

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

A very sad poem. But it was really good. I could really feel all the emotions as I was reading it. You did wonderfully on this one. I loved it alot. Not a thing I would change either. =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Awh. Another well written sad poem. I liked it though. It flowed rather well too. Great Job.

This is another nice poem i loved it!

Chilled me once again. you have such talent in expressing darkness and emotion. x

Wow, such strong emeotion. it's amazing!

Wow, such strong emeotion. it's amazing!

This is really good. You are a great writer. Thanx for the comment btw. 5/5

Very good. Usual technique but better then alot of them. 5/5

I like the begining. but the end seemed sloppy. Not the best you have ever done. But it's good.