Very nicely written poem. It's weird how this is a dark poem, but the last verse gives a shy ray of light. Good stuff!

I'm attracted to the message of it, being in my position. As well as the simple, flawless wording. I like it very much Sir.

I can definately say i have felt like this... it so nice to read great poems with happy endings...
~courtie

I can relate , thx so much for commenting on my poem! 5/5 as always

Wow that was incredible...Nice flow throughout...5/5

Your poems are so inspirational. I love reading them. They always have a perfect rhyme scheme, and you my friend are a terrific rhymer.

Very honored to get the oppertunity to say something about one of your poems.
I see a lot of me in this one, the longing for something.
It's amazing how you put it on paper, I loved it!

take care of yourself,
~*TasH*~

From within your soul the darkness grows
The gray dark matter that the aura knows
Nothing but void, and empty space
Longing to be filled with His grace

^^^^ This verse alone is a reflection of my soul lately. How I long to be filled with HIS grace and HIS peace, away from the evil and flesh that has torn my heart and soul apart. Nice job

--Sher

Brilliant poem, it truly is a great peice. its written very well and the flow is very good.

I love it...

Wow.. great poem.. thx for the comment! this poem really explains depressions so well.. it has a lot of emotion and depth to it wow!... awesome work! once again beautiful poem =)

--emotionless19*

Wow, the flow is so excellent in here, and it's nice to see optimism throughout despite it appearing to be a sad poem. Nice write :)

Brilliant. keep it up

Wonderful. A dark poem so full of hope by the last Stanza! Keep writing and never stop.

Great job i really like it i have u as one of my favorites and hope that u could add me

Love
micky

Great poem, i'm new here and have only done a few poems, hope you can check them out sometime :) 5/5 definately.

I loved your poem, I can only hope that you will read some of mine and tell me what you think.

I absolutely LOVE this.
keep up the good work.

I can fing three words that describe this poem: best poem ever.

Wow amazing....Manda