Mystic feature

Do you see
this mystic feature raising his arms?
Do you notice
this unrealistic sight?
Do you care
he did this all for you ?
Do you even
show him any attention?

Why can\'t you see what he can make your life be?
Why do you hide and bleed from every tear you cry?
Why are you moaning!?
Get your lazy self up off those lying feet!
And let this mystic feature carry you in his open arms.

I have this compassion and it\'s killing me not to try.
All I want and all I need, lies right inside my heart.
So won\'t you take some of this love,
for I could never need so much.

Do you hear
his sweet voice when he speaks of comfort?
Do you feel
his touches when he brings you an unknown miracle?
Do you understand
the love he has for you and everyone else?
Do you believe
he died for you so you shall have everlasting life?

So I whisper to you for Jesus will know if your are listening.
Let him carry you (for you will never fall again).
Ask him into your heart and forgive you of your sins.

this was written more to be a song.. :] does it make since as a song? if you have ne criticism please pleas tell me and any suggestions.. i really want to see how good i can make this so please please comment and tell me... i wrote it fast so it may not be that good :] thanks so much .. if you comment the favor will be returned