LOVE IT,LOVE IT !!!!
Well done!!!

5/5
~Sara~

Hey this is really good! I can relate and I give it a 5!!

*Chels

Its the most awsumly writen poem ive read...grt work hun

Oh wow, another great poem. I love this one, been there done it, so I really feel it. Excellent job again. Keep it up.

Woooah....such an awesome poem...SOoo good !
i loved it.
i hope everything is okay with u..

and thnaks for the comment on my poem, it meant alot..
Great poem!!!!
xo

Thanks for the comment. that poem was really hard for me to write cause i wrote it while i was in the process of lettin go. i like your stuff!

I'm astounded! Speechless even, and I'm never speechless! You don't need me to tell you how amazing this poem is.

Really well writen nice rythmin stlye

Luv it!! :) this is so good, it's exactly what I'm going through right now!!

Omg....I'm gonna cry. I wish I coulda said that 2 my ex. AWW.....Great poem....I gave it a *5*.

Wow, I can definately relate to this one, I think you've done a great job here, there is so much feeling in this. As a bonus your flow and rhythm is completely perfect and ties everything up nicely. The ending also works very well and I like how you've used a common expression in a non-cliched way. great stuff.

Wow.This poem went straight to the core of my heart.Right now I can so relate to the emotion and what you are saying.Every stanza is strong and says so much.I was so moved by this.The pain of heartbreak, the trauma of the aftermath, the waiting to be alive and love again.This is so heart-achingly emotional and captures it with such honsesty.Excellent.

Hey,thanks for sayen youll be there, it means a lot, and thanks for commenting on my poem, i'm here to comment on yours now. It's very good! I understand how you feel and i know what your sayen all too well. just do your best to realize that no matter how unlikely it seems you WILL get over it. KEep up your good work!

Wow this poem was really good. The flow was excellent. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up :)
Lovest Shannon
P.S. Thanks for your comment. It meant a lot.

U are such an amazing writter!! wow i just love your poems!! this one really hit home with me!! wow seriously its exactly what i'm feeling!! keep writing!

This is really good i like how u put all ur feelings into this!!!!

The starting lines are beautiful. good work

shobhana

I think you could have made this poem a bit longer to help with the mesaage you were trying to put through in him head.

It ended too abruptly. However, I still love it.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

I love every poem of yours I have ever read.

5/5 short and too the point. Well written :)