by Samantha Dec 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The little girl is very scared |
by pseudo
Awesome poem.. it was touching and very sad... its weird to see what the world has come to thats just reality i guess.. anyways you poem was very well wrtieen and well thought out =) keep it up |
Great poem, yuo did a very good job on it |
by Tara Kay
Wow, what a great poem. well done, very powerful and emotional. Keep it up |
by Sherry Lynn
Wow that is powerful. The flow was a little off, but the message was loud and clear. You did a great job portraying the fear and reality of abuse. |