Wow that is powerful. The flow was a little off, but the message was loud and clear. You did a great job portraying the fear and reality of abuse.

--Sher

Wow, what a great poem. well done, very powerful and emotional. Keep it up
tara xxxx

Great poem, yuo did a very good job on it

Awesome poem.. it was touching and very sad... its weird to see what the world has come to thats just reality i guess.. anyways you poem was very well wrtieen and well thought out =) keep it up

--emotionless19