Finally u did it ... nice finish .. i love all of ur poems especially dis one it rele evokes some feelings in myself .. well hope i'll ttyl8erz ... till den take carez!! of course 5/5

Yep, it does sounds like reality, well, cool poem, like I said before, 5/5. Awesome work hun...=)

Great work, this poem was amazing.

A beutiful poem again..its so well written.. i love all ure poems...think they're gr8...so dnt stop writing!!
xxx
mezkenzie
5/5