Has Anyone Noticed?

by Rhinehalt   Dec 19, 2005


Has anyone had a feeling
Of something dark inside?
Has anyone seen the darkness
Where light once use to roam?
Has anyone have a clue
Where hope went missing to?
Has anyone got a mind
On how we find God?
Has anyone got the know how
On how to get free?
Has anyone felt the cold
That seems to be slipping in?
Has anyone known
That the floor seems so hard?
Has anyone tried to touch
Anything at all?
Has anyone got a clue
Where anyone is at?
Has anyone even seen
The darkness in the dark?
Has anyone felt
That chilling touch?
Has anyone at all
Notice that I\'m gone?

**Felt like writing a poem full of questions. Drove my teachers nuts with these types in school. :D Comment please!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katz

    Very deep! i like it!

  • 18 years ago

    by .:*Nicole*:.

    I don't know what your teacher is talking about, I love poems made of questions!

    **Thank you so much for commenting on my poems! You're the first one to say anything, probably becuase I'm not popular here and no body ever reads them...

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Great poem, and to every one of those questions i have.
    and im so sorry u feel the same.
    I read ur other poems, but it's not letting me comment=(
    take care huni...hopefully u reach out now..so that someone can notice and help u.
    xoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylar

    I have...and its not a very nice feeling

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