Silent Lullaby (Cont'd)

by Void   Dec 19, 2005


A few years go by, and the angel is no longer a baby.
She now walks with friends, a beautiful young lady.
Her stomach is swollen with a gift from above,
Another angel has fallen, bringing God's love.

But the years that went by, affected the world,
Especially the mother of that sweet little girl.
She lays at home in her bed, older and ill,
But she smiles her silent lullaby still.

The girl goes to visit, and talk 'till sunrise,
And a story comes up that makes mother cry.
Remembering just how, together they grew,
Side by side, hand in hand, and heart to heart to.

She whispers to her angel, "I love you so much"
And the whisper was returned with her daughter's touch.
With a kiss on the forehead and a twinkle in her eye,
The daughter had smiled a silent lullaby.

- For this one and the first part (which I'm sorry I seperated, I just wrote this one later, and thought that the other one was long enough) I'm not sure what category I should put them in..Could you share your opinion, and tell me where you think it should go? It would be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much! I'll return the favour of any and all comments!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    Wow! both part one and part two were amazing! how do u do it? keep the flow and the feeling so smooth and beautiful! ur an an inspiration to us all and i dont belive that u r a novice. i saw u write that in one of ur comments...but u r not a novice! that was so beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww that's soo sweet. Congradulations. Behind door #1 you get a 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    ^_^ I very much enjoyed reading this and the other part to this poem. Very well arranged and nicely written. Awesome work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Great poem 5/5 all the way also thanks for your comments in the discussion

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    It's good in the catorgry (ehh spellcheck) you chose. The poem is awesome. good job.