It's like another chapter in a book. You did a great job connecting the poems. This piece is very good on it's own. Excellent stuff. I am forward to reading more. You are added to my favourites.

It's good in the catorgry (ehh spellcheck) you chose. The poem is awesome. good job.

Great poem 5/5 all the way also thanks for your comments in the discussion

^_^ I very much enjoyed reading this and the other part to this poem. Very well arranged and nicely written. Awesome work!

Aww that's soo sweet. Congradulations. Behind door #1 you get a 5/5.

Wow! both part one and part two were amazing! how do u do it? keep the flow and the feeling so smooth and beautiful! ur an an inspiration to us all and i dont belive that u r a novice. i saw u write that in one of ur comments...but u r not a novice! that was so beautiful