Just drain it all out

This is a really sad poem,, but still good,, hope ur alright,, try something lighter next time,though,, then let me know when u have it done,, ok?
cant wait to read more,, bye for now

doz an1c me?

That was an interesting style to write that poem in, pretty creative
i liked it

OMC!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS ONE

awsomeeeee

this is surely one of the best ones i've read from you..great great job
Pure emotion is reflected in this poem and it's very touching, and i know it's very true. 5/5 for sure

You know you've got a reason to smile now =)

I speacially loved this 2 parts:

"Drain out my heart
Before all this love is taken and never given back"

"Drain out this distance between us
Before its too far to come back"

and i LOVED so much this part:

"Drain out all of the cazuela,
Before I go there and eat it"
(very, very touching ik...)

hehe lol estoy muy cazuelia sorry
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i've g2g to the bathroom i'll brb

hay q tirar cazuela
AMEN

byebye

Ms. Battery

Wow. that poem was amazing, i love it. i could relate to it so much.

-Nella

WOW! Hun that was an amazing poem so heart felt and passionate, sad and honest. So great and very easy to relate to. I love you sweetie, please hang on a little longer, don't give up on life quite yet. If you have some time I want you to read my Because I love you Poem and read it as if it were to you. Hold on baby, just hold on!

-Tainted Mikochan