Comments : Just drain it all out

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    WOW! Hun that was an amazing poem so heart felt and passionate, sad and honest. So great and very easy to relate to. I love you sweetie, please hang on a little longer, don't give up on life quite yet. If you have some time I want you to read my Because I love you Poem and read it as if it were to you. Hold on baby, just hold on!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Nella Heartbreaker.

    Wow. that poem was amazing, i love it. i could relate to it so much.

    -Nella

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    OMC!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS ONE

    awsomeeeee

    this is surely one of the best ones i've read from you..great great job
    Pure emotion is reflected in this poem and it's very touching, and i know it's very true. 5/5 for sure

    You know you've got a reason to smile now =)

    I speacially loved this 2 parts:

    "Drain out my heart
    Before all this love is taken and never given back"

    "Drain out this distance between us
    Before its too far to come back"

    and i LOVED so much this part:

    "Drain out all of the cazuela,
    Before I go there and eat it"
    (very, very touching ik...)

    hehe lol estoy muy cazuelia sorry
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    i've g2g to the bathroom i'll brb

    hay q tirar cazuela
    AMEN

    byebye

    Ms. Battery

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    That was an interesting style to write that poem in, pretty creative
    i liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    This is a really sad poem,, but still good,, hope ur alright,, try something lighter next time,though,, then let me know when u have it done,, ok?
    cant wait to read more,, bye for now

    doz an1c me?