This is really deep... I love it.

I wish i could write like that...u r an excellent writer...very deep...nice wording..keep writing..thx for the comments
love ya lots,
sore

Your dark languange is good, say, I would like to see a slightly longer piece from u as a change, 4 now I gtg, but be sure 2 get back 2 u...

Wow! I like the way you write.. This poem kept me reading it over and over again... :)

II read your poems over and over again
and im afaird to comment cause i always
think what i get from ur crazy poems< crazy
in a cool way> may not be what u r really
talking about. I just know they are good
and u r extremerly talentive. cy

I think my poem the mask has a little of
some this poem also the band <STAIND>
song OUTSIDE reflexs a little
staind by the way along with alice in chains
are my favorite bands cy

How do you choose man i love that
I OFFEN ASK that SAME QUESTION

Wow. is all i can manage to say =)

This is a great poem. keep up the good work.