Comments : She Could Never Be

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Wow! so powerful! it really put me there, in the position of a teen dealing with parents who are separating from the debilitating word and action known as "divorce". ive never had such pain of going through such a thing, my parents were never married, but from the poem, if you have, youve described it quite well. how your torn between the two sides and feeling forced to choose. wow! its beutifully written.
    please keep writing and stay safe strong, and healthy!
    always an avid fan,
    AntiSocial16

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I know that feeling well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    OMG this actually brought tears to my eyes i hope ur writting for a friend cos its so sad if something like this happened to u its really good poety i can feel the words

  • 18 years ago

    by Alixia

    I loved that poem very much.
    I missith you.
    I can't believe I am sitting at school without your beautiful face.
    I love you.
    Miss you.
    Love Alixia

  • 18 years ago

    by DC_Skater

    Hey hun..this is so sad I almost cried..I miss you hun! hope to talk to you soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marilyn

    I love this, i really do.....is this how you feel dearest???
    You make *me* proud just being my friend. so amazing, yeah.

    ta love
    ryn

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie M.

    This poem was EXCELLENT!You are a beautiful writer!I plan to read A LOT more of your poems!