This is a really good poem...well written...
Eva

Dark, Beautiful, well written, all of these and so much more. I love this poem, it deserves much higher praise than simple words.
Excellent work,
*VioletRaven*

Powerful write here. You had me going to the very end. Your descriptions are amazing, I felt like I'm 'her' kissing and feeling this beautiful creature. =) I like the way you make the vampire feels so real. A dark lovely tale. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. =)

I just wanted to thank you for your comments,
My writing is pretty s**t, I only do it to express myself in a way, so thanks for giving me them.
Im f**king lame at it, so that anyone even read them, is an accomplishment.
You write pretty well.

Awesome Job...I love this poem...its beautiful....10/10...Joc

Wow there arent any words to describe really loved it! great job keep it up! ^_^