Beautiful, heartfelt poem....a hint of sadness for the missing, but a feeling of triumph for what is to come. Great write!

Simon,
Just wanna thank you so much for your comment on my last poem....it means a lot to me! You're poem's beautiful as well. 5/5 Great job and keep it up my friend ^_^

Simon, I love it! Thanks for the comments on my poetry. This poem had so much love in it. I could feel it. Fantastic writing! I loved the flow. I'm voting for this...

Simon ,
Oh my ...sweet man ...your love and dedication for your wife is so incredibly beautiful ....
Sadness and joy fill my heart at the same time....
Sadness because you miss her so ...
Joy because you love each other so much ..
A very heart touching piece my friend ...

Such a precious love you share, what a treasure you have found. Its a bit sad but filled with love, hope and longing for her return home. Very touching and beautifully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Nice one ;)

Very nice.. good job 5/5

I really liked this poem. You did a great job and it really makes me want to check out more of your work. WoW!!! That says it all. I understand how you feel when I am away from my bf I feel that way. Good job, look for more comments from me on your other poems. Check out some of mine as well. 5/5 deserves more though