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You need to work on some the grammar and to really draw out those powerful questions you were asking add some question marks. Very thought-provoking poem. Great!

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Great expression in this peice very strong and well portrayed

5/5

Another nice poem. And very true! I didn't notice any rhyming in it. But that's fine, Rhyming doens't always have to be in poetry. But you did a great job on this one. You expressed your feelings about this subject very clearly! Great job! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

It's a pretty good poem with a great message, though I would have loved a bit more elaboration to add to the poem.

-Tainted Mikochan

This was good when it comes to a message but it seems a bit awakward because you're missing aletter every now in then. Life=life's. It=it's etc. Everything else is really good though.