Comments : Before She Hit The Ground

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    I have nothing really to say, besides it was very well written. the last two lines caught me:
    "She was tangled, bloody, and broken,
    Before she hit the ground. "
    that she was already doomed before sshe actually died.
    please, stay safe strong, and healthy!
    AntiSocial16

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    It is like one can believe they are better off dead sometimes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marilyn

    Why are you so great at this?