Good. alas very good. better than that. i love it, really. truly you write from your mind rather than your heart and feelings. cleverness. arent we all glad you arent a blubbering idiot? think with your brain and not you heart. very good.

Wonderful and indeed painful descriptions you have there. Vivid images you created. I can vision this torn and tattered angel. Beautiful yet hidden behind all these scars. If only I can see the picture you've drawn. =) Anyway, a sad and emotional piece. Thanks for sharing. =D

Omg i am actually speechless! a very dark and beautiful poem! xxxxx

Briliant, uterly outstanding. *hug* you are a realy great writer.

Wow! that's incredible! i love the way it sets the reader up to believe they're reading about the fall of Lucifer but then it turns out to be about something else. I also love the description of his body being a parody, that's such an original metaphor. In fact the whole poem's original, I love it!