Wow thats exelent. the language was a bit intence though for a love poem.
great feeling though. well done

Ruby

Great work, there was a lot of feeling put into this poem.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ♥
he is a jackass though so no aww
GRRRRRRRRRRRRR

I loved your poem so much, it touched me because i feel the same way for someone. keep writing because you are really good chech out my stuff sometime, and tell me how im doin
-cochise

Wow! i just been in like...the EXACT same situation! EXACT same...thats amazing how much the same that was! phew...let me get my breath back..it blew me away! ahha...i have so many poems that are based on this kind of situation but written differenly, feel free 2 check them out! well done..made my heart jump

BEAUTIFUL
i love it