"as you loose yourself in the muddle,"

lose*

Well, I must say, this poem was touching. I felt like I was the person you were talking to, because I am that person in a sense. Granted, you didn't write the poem about me, it was about someone you know, but that is exactly what I'm like... And it was very insightful. I loved it! The rhyme scheme flawless... Keep writing! I'm glad I found this poem :)

~BJ~