Comments : The things I do for you...

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hun its a good poem, its realtable and heartfelt, that most likely why its doing so well, keep it up and I find the poems I dont like as the author are the ones that everyone loves...-sigh- keep it up

    Much Love
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    That was great! Your friend is crazy! There's no doubt in my mind why it's doing so well. It's because it was written so well!! :D

    Love, Poetvoices

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven

    Well yay for me, I shall write more poems I dont like xD

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    It's pretty good, I must give you that.
    It makes the reader believe in what you are writing, and that's an amazing gift.
    So yeah, if you didn't like this one, I suggest you indeed write some more you don't like then ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Raven Roth

    That was great. What else can I say?.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    Wow this is so sweet i really like the ending it made the whole poem heartfelt

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Ppl give it high results because it comes from the heart and its written from your sould and u've put all ur feeling into it. you also use rhyme very well and dont let it be the subject of your poem as happens to many ppl. its written really well stop putting urself down mr.lol. and the thing is i find that the poems we dont think are that gd others love. take care and i', giving it a 5 for the reasons i gave.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    OMG! I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THIS POEM EXCEPT ABUOT GUYS! wow...this was 1 of the best love poems ive evr read...wow....5/5 4 sure!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by britt

    This is a really good poem