Comments : Dark world

  • 18 years ago

    by ~lost*and*lonely~

    This was very interesting keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Neil

    Aww very dark also somewhat appealing to me i like thanks 4 lettin me read it keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tenisha

    I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!it was soo sad i could practically visualize the land u have very discriptive writing and it is sooo beautiful keep up the great work!!(-_-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hey Em, happy b'day for today!! must suck being on christmas.
    Your poem rocked, it was so descriptive. i loved it. well done.

    i'll see you on new year hopefully (party).

    love always, Suzie