I really like this one, a lot, an awful lot. Means a lot and i like the words and rhyme etc etc. Goodo!!! xxx |
Awwwww sweetie that poem is great. I really like it and i know exactly how you feel. I can feel your pain now because im dealing with it as i write you. This is probably the last time i will comment on your beautiful work because im leaving now. Im so tired of this stuff and all the people its just my time to go. Well good luck writing you are awesome, Trisha |
by Matters
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Hey huni, omg wow i totally loved this and i can so relate 2 what u r saying, u r just sick of everything life has in store 4 u coz it all seems so bad? i no what u mean but remember bub im always here 4 u, wen life gets hard ill always b here 2 have ur back, **friends 4 lyf** well hold on and stay strong, luv u always bub |
Wow...Everytime I read another of your poems it always leaves me speechless and thinking because they're always so powerful and written so well! |
by JAY Poet
I really loved this poem this was just great you the best i loved it so much 5/5 |
by Torn
Aw hun that was amazing. |
by Brook
Wow Emma..it's amazing. you truly have a way with words. |
by Stabbylou
Amazing poem, the repetition really makes it powerful, i was really stunned. good work hammedy ham xxx |
Fantastic poem, i can relate to this so much right now, but its a new year, and hopefully a new beginning now. your words are so strong, i love these lines: |
by xEmmax
Thanku so much every1, this support means a lot! take care xxxxx |
I know the feeling, but if you accept that life sucks, you can at least try to make the best of it! But once again, you are so right it hurts! |
Ok so I've already commented on this one but I love it so much! Keep writing! |