Wooow hunny its a great poem and there are alot of great techniques in it. ive read some really good poems butt hats a really really great poem. keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more of your poems. good luck with the comp loves ya crimson-pain xxxxxxx

You manage to express your feelings through this poem, which I reckon was your intentions. However, there is little, or nothing, original about it, and i have read many almost identical poems before.

As for the contest you mentioned below the poem...its a scam, believe me. The whole thing is just bullshit. Don`t lett them trick you, Your poem will never be published through that site.

It's good and good for u that it's getting published i wish u luck in the
finals

Its very pretty! good job!

It was a great poem!

Quite impressive, it should definitely be sent to a competition

I love it!!

Awesome!! i love it dood! keep writing!

Geat poem i wish mines can be as good as urs but im feelin this i can kinda relate to it too
GREAT POEM

THAT iS S00 AWES0ME! C0NGRATULATi0NS. & THE P0EM iS GREAT:]

Wow awsome!!! sooooo wat happened next did u get a thosand dollars......this is a awsome poem!! keep on writin..

Wow kym,,,,,,,,this poem is really really goood................ loll seriously lol like woah